I need feed back on my new website. Please, visit it and help me with wording! Any suggestions will be appreciates! All good and bad! This is not my forte! Please help me!
I read through the whole thing. It didn't even sound like you. I think that it sounds like you love what you do and know what you are doing. I can't think of anything that I would change. Good job!
A couple of proof-reading things: on the home page, add an "r" at the end of the first line so it says "your". Softness only has one "e". On your Services page under Window Treatments, the second paragraph should read "soften the feel of any room". Under Bedding, personally should have two "l"'s. My favorite page is the "about us" page. You're beautiful!!!! XOXOXOXO
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I read through the whole thing. It didn't even sound like you. I think that it sounds like you love what you do and know what you are doing. I can't think of anything that I would change. Good job!
A couple of proof-reading things: on the home page, add an "r" at the end of the first line so it says "your". Softness only has one "e". On your Services page under Window Treatments, the second paragraph should read "soften the feel of any room". Under Bedding, personally should have two "l"'s. My favorite page is the "about us" page. You're beautiful!!!! XOXOXOXO
Fairly nice. It needs some more attractions honestly speaking.
What kind of attractions?
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